注意：

　　1．词数100左右，征文题目已给出，不计入总数；

　　2．短文要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯。

　　【学生习作】

　　Parents and Children

　　In the evening of April 9,1 Li Hua was watching TV when his mother was busy preparing supper.2 Li Hua was so hungry that he began to complain about his mother’s slow.3 At that time, the telephone rang. She was a friend of her mother.4 She said to Li Hua today was his mother’s birthday. She wished her mother a good birthday. What a shame! Li Hua has forgot all about it.5He cares himself more than his mother.

　　At the story, I got deeply shocked. It is not easy for parents to bring us up.6 They give us

　　lots of love and care, while we don't care for them enough. Now it's never too late to realize

　　this and show our love and care for them.

　　山东省高青县第二中学高三·一班

　　樊镇镇

　　【教师点评】

　　本文为一篇夹叙夹议的图画作文。习作者能抓住图画要点，将有关事件有机地联系在一起。议论部分能切中时弊、有的放矢。既点出了李华这种行为的根源，又向社会发出了呼吁。说明作者有一定的社会洞察力和语言表达能力。从文中的错处可看出，习作者犯的都是“小”错误。而小错在一定程度上会影响英语水平的提高。若能突破这一点，习作者的写作水平一定会有很大提高。

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