解析:此句的断句刚好是各个分号,容易识别。语言较为简单,顺势翻译即可。
2、 句式重构
句式重构就是根据原文的结构,按照汉语叙事的习惯重新组合句子使得汉语行文更加流畅自然。
例2、 It is impossible to express theflutterings of my very heart when I found all my wealth about me: for as the Brazil ships come all in fleets, the same ships which brought my letters brought my goods: and the effects were safe in the river before the letters came to my hand.
译文: 巴西的船只编队航行,其中一艘船带来了我的信,同时也把我的货物运载过来了:这封信送达我手中之前,财产已经安全抵达里斯本河了。当我知道我的财富近在眼前时,心中一阵阵激动狂喜之情无法言表。
解析:当然此句也可以按照原文的顺序翻译。但是汉语在很多情况下,按照“原因在前,结果在后”或“前提在前,结论在后”的顺序来陈述因果关系的,英语恰恰相反。本句的中调是强调“It is impossible to express the flutterings……”的部分,所以句子结构调整下更为符合汉语的表达。
例3、 Food manufacturers are flooding the UK with new products in response to rising demand from a population hungry for “something different”.
译文:英国人极想“尝鲜“,对新产品的需求与日俱增,针对这种情况,食品生产商们正一个劲儿地向英国市场投放各种新产品。
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