2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义(北师大版):写作(十六)
去年寒假我同父亲去乡下看望奶奶,我多年未回家乡,看到那儿发生了很大的变化。这次故乡之行使我学到了不少东西。我打算今后每两年回去一次。学生习作·外教批改
During my last winter holiday,I went to the1countryside with my father to visit mygrandma with_my_father.2
I found a_large_change great changes there.The first time I came_back3 returned,theyare_live4 were all living in dirty homes with dogs and ducks and any5 otheanimals.Now,6 But last winter when I returned, they had a_big_house_to_birth_chickens.7 They also have8 had some poles
in_which_it_has9_some_fish fishponds.Every year,they sell it_and_have the fish for a lot of money.
A lot of villagers in my grandma’s village have10 had two-storeyed
houses,evidencing that their life11 lives becoming better_and_better12 had improved.I felt very happy.
During my trip,I found they_are13 all the villagers friendly and hard-working.I think these characteristics are worth of learning.
At the end of my trip,I told my father that I had_planned14 that_I_would_come_back planned to return every two years.He admitted15 agreed that it was a good idea.
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