2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义(北师大版):写作(十七)
我花了许多时间准备高考(college entrance examinations)。考试结果要一个月后才知道。但是不管能否考上大学,我都要继续努力学习,为建设祖国作贡献。学生习作·外教批改
I have spent much a lot of time preparing for this1 the college entrance examinations.Actually2 I have truly tried my best.
The result of the examinations will be shown3 released in a
month.I_will_send_myself_to_the_motherland_no _matter_exam_or_not.4 No matter
how badly I do in the exams,I will contribute to the motherland. I won’t stop studying.Every student should know that although one you
maybe5 may fail the
exam,but6 he you can also7 still be useful for to the country.We must have a great clear goal.Then we will have a_great
power8 the drive to work and studying.9
Now,our country is developing more_and_more_faster10 rapidly and so we need more and more people who have a11 good education.I believe it is a good chance for me to show12 prove my ability.
旁 批
1.this使用错误,examinations是复数形式,this是单数形式。此外,你这里指的是一个专门的考试,因此要用the。
2.actually这个词通常用来更正错误的信息,这里情况并非如此,因此应该用truly来强调他如何努力学习。
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