本性难移。我花了许多时间准备高考(college entrance examinations)。考试结果要一个月后才知道。但是不管能否考上大学,我都要继续努力学习,为建设祖国作贡献。学生习作·外教批改
I have spent much a lot of time preparing for this1 the college entrance examinations.Actually2 I have truly tried my best.
The result of the examinations will be shown3 released in a month. I will send myself to the motherland no matter exam or not.4 No matter
how badly I do in the exams,I will contribute to the motherland. I won’t stop studying. Every student should know that although one you maybe 5 may fail the exam,but 6 he you can also7 still be useful for to the country. We must have a great clear goal. Then we will have a great power8 the drive to work and studying.9
Now,our country is developing more_and_more_faster10 rapidly and so we need more and more people who have a11 good education. I believe it is a good chance for me to show12 prove my ability.
旁 批
1.this使用错误,examinations是复数形式,this是单数形式。此外,你这里指的是一个专门的考试,因此要用the。
2.actually这个词通常用来更正错误的信息,这里情况并非如此,因此应该用truly来强调他如何努力学习。
3.公布考试结果应该用release而不是show。
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