Dear Jack，

　　I'm sorry to hear that you are suffering from short­sightedness too.

　　To be frank，almost eight students out of ten in my class have to wear glasses in order to live a normal school life，including me. As far as I'm concerned，many factors contribute to this phenomenon. First，we Chinese students live under a great burden，a burden of examinations. You know，we have to fight our way in life with millions of peers.

　　第7讲 │ 美文欣赏 Second，most of us with short­sightedness don't have a good habit of using our eyes，either due to lack of knowledge or carelessness.

　　In this case，I strongly recommend that you should not use your computer for that long a time any more and that you should change your habit of reading in bed. Hopefully，your short­sightedness could be

　　corrected

　　by wearing proper glasses.

　　All in all，don't worry！It's no big deal.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua 第7讲 │ 美文欣赏 【全品点睛】

　　①行文逻辑：介绍情况→分析原因→提出建议。较好地使用了连接词语，如：to be frank，as far as I'm concerned，first，second，either…or…，all in all等。

　　②词汇短语：运用了较高难度的词汇。如：suffer from，contribute to，have a good habit of，due to，in this case，recommend，hopefully，in order to，fight our way等。 第7讲 │ 美文欣赏 ③句式句法：运用了多样化的句式和句法结构。如：宾语从句：…that you are suffering from short­sightedness too. 两个并列的宾语从句，并且分别使用了虚拟语气：I strongly recommend that you should not use your computer for that long a time any more and that you should change your habit of reading in bed. “All in all，don't worry！It's no big deal.”升华了主题，有画龙点睛之效。

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