Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you are suffering from shortsightedness too.
To be frank,almost eight students out of ten in my class have to wear glasses in order to live a normal school life,including me. As far as I'm concerned,many factors contribute to this phenomenon. First,we Chinese students live under a great burden,a burden of examinations. You know,we have to fight our way in life with millions of peers.
第7讲 │ 美文欣赏 Second,most of us with shortsightedness don't have a good habit of using our eyes,either due to lack of knowledge or carelessness.
In this case,I strongly recommend that you should not use your computer for that long a time any more and that you should change your habit of reading in bed. Hopefully,your shortsightedness could be
corrected
by wearing proper glasses.
All in all,don't worry!It's no big deal.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 第7讲 │ 美文欣赏 【全品点睛】
①行文逻辑:介绍情况→分析原因→提出建议。较好地使用了连接词语,如:to be frank,as far as I'm concerned,first,second,either…or…,all in all等。
②词汇短语:运用了较高难度的词汇。如:suffer from,contribute to,have a good habit of,due to,in this case,recommend,hopefully,in order to,fight our way等。 第7讲 │ 美文欣赏 ③句式句法:运用了多样化的句式和句法结构。如:宾语从句:…that you are suffering from shortsightedness too. 两个并列的宾语从句,并且分别使用了虚拟语气:I strongly recommend that you should not use your computer for that long a time any more and that you should change your habit of reading in bed. “All in all,don't worry!It's no big deal.”升华了主题,有画龙点睛之效。
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