I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

　　【答案】

　　Last Saturday 1 went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading

　　usual

　　near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. when

　　heard

　　happening

　　shocked

　　I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were

　　people

　　standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I

　　pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back

　　and to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.

　　my

　　I was proud

　　what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

　　of

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】as usual正如往常 固定短语

　　【小题2】while 引导的从句中，谓语动词应是延续性动词。

　　【小题3】时态前后应一致。

　　【小题4】happen是不及物动词，不能用被动

　　【小题5】我感到惊讶，应用shocked

　　【小题6】people是一个集体名词，始终表示复数概念。解释为“民族”时，才可以用单复数形式。

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