你朋友给急救中心打电话。最后,女孩脱离了危险,她的父母非常感谢你们。
请将你的这次经历写一篇120词左右的英语短文,寄给英文报社。
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这是一篇以叙事为主的记叙文,主要讲述的是my friend and I的经历。写作时,必须按要求以第一人称的口吻,先对所给出的信息要点进行加工整合,包括时间、地点、经过、急救措施等,最后是女孩父母的感激。时态可考虑以一般过去时为主。
[范文借鉴]
One day, my friend and I were walking along the street when we saw a car knocked a girl off her bicycle. We rushed to help her. We found her leg bleeding badly. I had learned some knowledge about first aid before, so I left her where she was. Quickly I found a clean handkerchief and pressed it onto the bleeding point and held it there.
Meanwhile my friend went to telephone the First Aid Center. We were staying with the girl until the doctors and her parents came.
Soon the girl came round. How grateful her parents to us!
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此篇记叙文覆盖了所有内容要点,叙述清楚、说明简单、达意。作者使用了一些较高级词汇和较复杂结构,如walk along the street, knock a girl off, rush to help her, some knowledge about first aid before等;连接词使用自然,如one day, quickly, meanwhile, soon等;使用了多种复杂句,如when和until引导的时间状语从句,感叹句How grateful her parents to us!等等。
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