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Beijing_named_the_22nd_of_every_month_as“Seatgiving_Day”to_encourage_passengers_on_public_transport_to_give_seats_to_those_in_great_need,_and_those_commuters_who_refuse_to_do_so_will_get_criticized._This_activity_arouses_different_opinions_among_netizens.
51% of netizens are for the activity. They think, for one thing, it is one of the China's traditional virtues to offer seats to the aged, pregnant women, children and the disabled. For another thing, more passengers' offering seats can leave a good impression on visitors both home and abroad.
49% of netizens, however, object to the activity. In their opinion, giving seats is a matter of willingness, and passengers should not be forced
to do so. Moreover, if some passengers get criticized only because of their refusal to offer seats, fewer commuters will approve the activity.
As far as I'm concerned, this activity is surely of great help to set a better image of Beijing. Through such activity, Beijing will see an increasing number of people willing to do so and an improvement of people's behavior.
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1.正文第二段的however,转移了话题,引出下文,起到了提纲挈领作用。
2.第二段使用for one thing...For another thing层次分明。
3.结尾用as far as I'm concerned,提出自己建议,过渡自然。
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