3．was→am

　　4．在 live 前加 to

　　5．for→by

　　6．kind→kinds

　　7．在English前加the

　　8．√

　　9．your→my

　　10．if→that 或去掉 if

　　One possible version

　　Dear editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident in my school．Several days ago, more than 20 students had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten after the school lunch meal．Learning that they must be poisoned, our teachers and other students immediately called the ambulance, which carried them quickly to hospital．After several hours’ treatment, they were fortunately brought out of danger．

　　However, this food poisoning incident has been dealt with properly．And we’ve come to realize the importance of food safety．I do hope that the whole society shall begin taking actions to stop such bad incidents happening again so that we can be free from worries and keep our minds on study．

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

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