As we see, a lovely kitty always keeps the old in company. It may bring good health to the old, as well as joy. And nowadays the harmonious society is being constantly promoted. We humans should live with animal friends in harmony as well. Only in this way can we make our earth a paradise for all the living.

　　So, choose an animal friend and be a friend to animals.

　　(By Zhuang Chenxi) 1.增加较复杂的句子结构

　　2.使用丰富的词汇 3.适当运用结构词和关联词:

　　however, therefore, thus, after a while,

　　all of a sudden, at last, as a result, in fact 等, 使句子 更为流畅。

　　As far as I am concerned, I strongly hold the opinion that this plan should be carried out continually not only because it gives us more space to develop our critical thinking and independent ability but also because we really feel much happier than ever before.

　　书面表达注意事项

　　My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had bravely saved my little sister.

　　My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had bravely saved my little sister.

　　I met an old friend in the street. The street was very crowded.

　　I met an old friend in the street, which was very crowded. We can make progress in English only in this way. Only in this way can we make progress in English.

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