2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第13讲过渡在写作中的应用_高考复习指南

2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第13讲过渡在写作中的应用

　　答案 One possible version: Located in the east of Asia, our homeland is a great country with a long history and rich culture. It covers an area of about 9,600,000 square kilometers with a population of about 1.3 billion. In addition, there are a lot of world-famous tourist sites in China, such as the Great Wall, Jiuzhaigou Valley and so on, which attract a good many visitors from all over the world every year. Much to our pride, great changes have taken place in our country in the past 30 years.

　　三、美文赏读 (2015四川) 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿; 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由; 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议; 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 [我来试写] Hi,Sharon, This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

　　 Li Xia

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　　One possible version: Hi,Sharon, This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am more than willing to lend a helping hand to you. I am convinced I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I have such a good command of Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio sta- tion of our school,but I also won second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year. When it comes to improving Mandarin,my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every day and practice speaking it whenever possible.Just as the saying goes,practice makes perfect. By the way,I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability,espe- cially the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar. Looking forward to your reply. Li Xia 【写作点评】本文作者利用过渡语、过渡句等手段连接上下文,使文章表达清楚、连贯、自然,浑然一体,出色地完成了写作任务。