2017届贵州省桐梓县高考英语一轮写作阅读练习：5（含解析）_高考复习指南

2017届贵州省桐梓县高考英语一轮写作阅读练习：5（含解析）

　　第二档（较差）：（7～12分）表达含糊不清，不能成篇。

　　未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 —主要内容与提示基本吻合。 —语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。 —有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 —语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

　　第一档（差）：（1～6分）动了笔，仅罗列了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

　　未能完成试题规定的任务。 —主要内容与提示不太吻合 —语法结构单一，应用词汇项十分有限。 —较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。 —缺乏语法之间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。

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　　未能传达给读者任何信息，内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

　　One possible version:

　　In order to succeed ,we should realize the importance of life goal ．Without a clear goal ,we will feel confused and lost while if a goal is set ,we may make a sensible schedule and confirm to it ．

　　I was not aware what I wanted to chase until the discussion what is My Chinese Dream was held in my class last term． I used to believe that it made no difference whether I studied hard or not to our nation． The fate of a country had nothing to do with the individual student． Fortunately, because of the hot discussion from my classmates, I have transformed my mind． Now, I’m conscious I have to devote all my passion to achieving my personal goal as well as to striving for the great revival of the motherland．