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　　One possible version: I am an 18-year-old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.①Feeling quite sorry for that,I be-gin to think about what to do to help them. Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?Firstly I collected all the books,newspapers and other things ②scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the floors. At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors ③shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satis-faction in her eyes.Tired as I was,I felt happy. 【写作点评】 在文中①—③处作者巧妙运用现在分词和过去分词作状语、定语和补语,使得语言表达简洁、生动,在整篇文章中起到了锦上添花的作用,值得大家反复揣摩、学习和模仿。

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