2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：2（含解析）_高考复习指南

2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：2（含解析）

　　With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.

　　Interestingly, our school called on us students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have made some changes in my way of life, which range from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. Just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though it is not so convenient. The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.

　　I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.

　　Yours,

　　LiHua

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　　试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，，对低碳生活的理解校开展的活动最近生活方式的改变三个最近生活方式的改变

　　【亮点说明】For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school.”就达20个字。全文共8句(不包括所给的部分)，涉及简单句3个，复合句5个，开头句和最后依据非常吸引人的眼球。开头句中用了“with”复合结构“With the environment problem coming into attention”，还用了非常靓丽的复合句 “it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet”.最后一句更是错综复杂：总体说，这是一个复合句，由主句“The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead”加“which”引导的非限制性定语从句“which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity”；主句中包含了并列句“but we sometimes read instead”；该句中还用了一个插入语“I think”对整个长句起到了缓冲的作用。短语“make a difference，In response to，range from transportation to water saving”等的使用也彰显了作者扎实的语言基本功。