4． One possible version:

　　Let us all go out for food safety

　　It is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths, so food safety had been drawing the public’s great attention.

　　Food problems mainly lie in the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack social conscience. Centering on money, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, other producers are short of common sense on food safety, thus poison and addictive abuse pollutes food.

　　For the sake of health, we must take food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay more attention to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secondly, food supervisors shall operate strict food standards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to regular markets to choose green food.

　　【解析】 略

　　5．

　　I’m writing to you about the tropical tour I went on last Friday. I have some complaints about it.

　　First of all, it was hot last Friday, but the air conditioner didn’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad. What’s worse, it sent us back to our hotel so late--one and a half hours late that we missed our dinner. In addition, although your experienced guide knows the area well, she couldn’t make herself heard among the crowd. Last but not least, when watching the birds, there were not enough binoculars for everyone, so some of us lost the chance to watch those beautiful birds. It was terrible.

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