注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例;
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
⑤词数为100左右。
【答案】
Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me.
In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class.
It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.
【解析】
【亮点说明】作者在本篇范文中首先用一个长句Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me介绍材料内容,然后对此发表看法,不仅在结构安排上符合材料作文的写作要求,而且也完成了本文的写作要求。实际上本文的最大亮点就是涵盖信息量大的长句的使用,作者一共用了两个长句,其中包括定语从句和强调句,这充分显示了作者深厚的写作功底,此外,在本文中作者还使用了高级词汇词组in face, as a result, tired out and depressed, efficient等,这是文章的另一个亮点所在。
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