【参考范文】
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
【亮点点评】
范文使用了一些重点句型:定语从句I would原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...;宾语从句I could learn a great deal from him about it,②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;条件状语从句If I could interview him;非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等显示了扎实的语法功底也使作文的句式变得多样化;范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语:not only...but also...;one of the...;the first to do sth, ;a great deal;such...as等使作文的内容得到了丰富;范文注意使用not only...but also, 和finally等来衔接句子使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。
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