1.时态混用。(文中横线处为时态错误应用一般过去时)
2.语法模糊。(文中斜体处为后置定语使用不当和虚拟语气使用错误)
3.用词不当。(文中方框处应分别为took partin/contest/announced较为妥当)
Dear Brooke,
I am writing to tell you that I
the English Speech
that was held in my school yesterday.
As the only one from my class,I have to challenge the other 15 excellent participants selected from the whole school.When it comes to me to present,I gets a little bit nervous at first,but soon I calm down when I think of your words and suggestions.As you predicted,everything goes smoothly and I performed perfectly.Although the questionandanswer section was the most challenging,I manage to get through it properly with the techniques you taught me.When the judge
the result,I wasn't at all surprised but quite excited!
I got the first prize in the ,which I couldn't imagine months ago.Thank you very much for your unselfish and careful help.Without your help,I will not get the first prize.
I'm looking forward to your return to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
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