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　　I'm sorry to know that you have been deeply troubled by your relationship with Fei. With your mistaking his care for love, his declination to your confession and your useless efforts to recover, your study and life have been negatively impacted.

　　Honestly, I can thoroughly understand your pain as I was in your shoes a year ago. I fell in love with my classmate Jack and was supposed to be happier. But the truth is that we lived in pain because of jealousy and finally broke up half a year later. It took me a long time to cure myself and my performance in study has been affected, which has made me regretful.

　　Based on my experience, you must have realized campus love scarcely ends up well. So why not just focus on winning your way to a top university, where there's a better chance to meet your Mr. Right? To get yourself together, you’d better spend more time with people who can make you happy. Moreover, set yourself a realistic goal in study to get concentrated. Finally, seek for professional advice from psychiatrists if necessary.

　　Your past experience is a sour and immature apple. If you drop it and head for a bright and right direction, I’m sure you'll eventually find a sweet and red apple of your eye.

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