It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.
Yours,
Xiaohua
【解析】这篇书面表达主要结合要点来写,首先介绍家乡江城的自然情况:The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in.这里的stand表示位于,不定式to live in做定语修饰a beautiful place。然后介绍江城的成就,Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. 这句话中的时态很重要,用现在完成式。More schools and hospitals are available for its people.这里的be available for是“可以获得的”。表达存在问题时,要注意用表示转折的词,像however,such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.举例说明这里用了such as。最后是对江城发展的看法,让考生自己发挥,就要看考生的思维和表达能力了,用In my opinion,引出自己的观点,I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.这句话里面用了be brought under control“控制住….”,so that引导的是目的状语从句。都是很值得学习的。
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