【习作的缺点】
2.某些句型的运用上有错误
如:(5)However, in the second picture, an oil bottle fell down and the mother criticized angrily the little boy didn’t straighten the bottle up. 动词 criticize”后面接 that 从句However, in the second picture, an oil bottle fell down and seeing the little boy didn’t straighten it up, the mother criticized him angrily”
3.某些句与句之间缺乏必要的连贯
【修改后的习作】
Education, which has always been a hot topic, plays a very important role in today’s world .But not every parent knows how to educate their children correctly.
As is shown in the first picture, when a little girl fell down, a little boy wanted to help her. But his mother prevented him and said, “You can’t, otherwise someone else would say that it was you that knocked her off.” However, in the second picture, an oil bottle fell down but the little boy didn’t straighten it. So the mother criticized him angrily when he yelled, ‘If I had done that, you would say the bottle was brought down by me.’ Hearing his explanation, the mother was shocked.
From my point of view, what the mother did was wrong. As we all know, parents are children’s first teachers. Therefore, I think parents should not only care for their children's health, but their minds. In addition, they should let their children know it's a pleasure to help others who are in trouble.
【2017届高考英语书面表达练讲指导评析(第三部分)考场习作评析(三)】相关文章:
★ 湖南省长沙县实验中学2016届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题02 报道评论话题指导(学生版)
★ 2017届高考英语书面表达练讲指导评析(第三部分)考场习作评析(四)
★ 重庆市2014高考英语阅读理解一轮(精品)训练题(14)附答案
★ 重庆市2014高考英语阅读理解一轮(精品)训练题(3)附答案
★ 2017年高考英语二轮复习精品资料:专题16 书面表达(教学案)(教师版)
★ 2017届高考英语二轮复习大题冲关秘籍完形填空之夹叙夹议文:考纲分析(含解析)
最新
2017-04-24
2017-04-24
2017-04-24
2017-04-24
2017-04-21
2017-04-21