(3)Then a man wandering around the factory with a cigarette in his mouth, feels confused when he notices the non-smoking sign on the wall.

　　(4)He wonders /is wondering why what the factory does doesn’t agree with what it says?

　　2.本习作运用的复杂句过多，不仅给人以故弄玄虚之嫌，而且使文章过于呆板，显得不是那么错落有致。

　　根据以上两点我们将习作修改如下：

　　【修改后的习作】

　　参考答案1(评论式)

　　What the pcture above reflects is a common phenomenon which should be taken into consideration. In our daily life, some people make rules to restrict others but on the contrary, they often break the rules. For example, parents urge their kids not to play electronic games while they often play them even when they are having meals. Shouldn’t parents set an example to their kids?

　　Nowadays, there exist quite a few people who are strict with others, yet tolerant to themselves. And it is hard to convince others. So in my opinion, only if we should be more strict with ourselves will we qualify for asking others for much.

　　参考答案(建议式)

　　This?is?a?funny and instructive picture.?In?the picture,?a?young?man?is smoking?happily?in?a?factory?when?he sees?a?sign which means “No?smoking” on the wall. But he finds that the?factory?is?giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled, “Why does the?factory?forbid people to smoke while the?factory?itself emits so much poisonous smoke?”

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