“柴米油盐”和“酒色财气”属于中文具体词,英译时不能直接对等,需要进行提炼概括;
“既有追求又有烦恼”属于前后对比,在行文时尽量添加适当的形容词修饰以增强语感。
原文:可惜远行奔波间,车马劳顿,总是行色匆匆,山水的怡情悦目,都如过眼的云烟,只不过领略了一个大概,不能去探寻幽僻的妙境。
“圆形奔波”,“车马劳顿”,“行色匆匆”,“怡情悦目”,“过眼烟云”……一大波四字成语。先不说怎么 大神译文:
Yet fatiguing/tiring/exhausting/ long-haul journeys basically mean that I can only get a sketchy picture/glimpse of enchanting/engrossing/inviting/engaging/amazing/arresting natural landscape that greets me along my way as I hurry along to attend to business, with little time left to explore remote, less spoiled serenity.
网友译文:
It is regretful that my rushing on the long journeys leaves me heavy with the fatigue of travel and unable to savor the soothing and pleasing landscape of mountains and waters. Their tranquil beauty fades away like floating clouds, leaving only a vague impression without the exploration of the secluded realm of beauty.
1. 这句的逻辑关系需要认真揣摩。句子大意或主体框架是“奔波劳顿使得我只能大概领略怡情的景色,匆匆忙忙而没有多少时间去探寻妙境”,这样C-C-E梳理后句子自然就容易处理了。
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