Dad swims so well that he can stay in the water for so long. I'll try again. So I held my breath and dived into the water, but in less than 10 seconds, I couldn't hold it, and suddenly came out of the water. My father laughed again when he saw me in such a mess. But I am not discouraged. I imitate my father's movements. Once, twice... I can dive.
就这样,一下午,我终于学会了游泳的“入门篇”——潜水,别提心里有多高兴啦!
In this way, one afternoon, I finally learned the "Introduction" of swimming - diving, don't worry about how happy it is!
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1.在大海里游泳是一件很惬意的事,但是要学会游泳却不那么容易,小作者就向我们描述了他第一次在海上游泳的经历,其中充满了学习的艰辛和成功的喜悦。内容真是完整,情节生动,层次分明。
1. Swimming in the sea is a very pleasant thing, but it is not so easy to learn how to swim. The young author describes his first experience of swimming in the sea to us, which is full of learning difficulties and joy of success. The content is really complete, the plot is vivid and the level is clear.
2.文章中将“我”学习游泳时的动作、感受及心理活动描写的十分细致生动,并通过爸爸的几次“笑”,衬托出“我”当时的尴尬情景。最终“我”凭借着坚持不懈的努力学会了潜水,成功后的喜悦不言而喻。
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