2. In the article, the movements, feelings and psychological activities of "I" learning swimming are described very carefully and vividly, and the embarrassing situation of "I" at that time is set off by Dad's several "smiles". Finally, "I" with unremitting efforts to learn to dive, the joy of success is self-evident.
3.语言自然流畅,故事脉络清晰,文章中心明确。
3. The language is natural and fluent, the story context is clear, and the article center is clear.
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