Open the lid. It's full of school supplies. The stationery box is divided into three layers: upper, middle and lower. The upper layer "sleeps" two water pens, one is blue and the other is black. They "lie" on a green iron ruler, with no sound at all, as if they were sleeping soundly. In the middle layer, there is a blue eraser, two short and unusable pencils and a shiny red water pen. Because of the small space in the lower layer, there are some refills in it.
文具盒虽然是用来供我学习用的,但是这个庞大的盒下,还“躲”着四个小轮子,只要将文具盒轻轻一推,它就能平稳地向前驶去。因为它比较长,再加上下面有“乘客”们便陆续下车,帮助我学习。
Although the stationery box is used for my study, under this huge box, there are still four small wheels. As long as you push the stationery box gently, it can move forward smoothly. Because it is relatively long, plus the following "passengers" will get off one after another to help me learn.
我的文具盒给我带来了欢乐,我爱我的文具盒。
My pencil box brings me joy. I love my pencil box.
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1.文章通过对文具盒的详尽描写,体现出小作者对它的喜爱之情。文章按照由外而内、由上至下的顺序,将文具盒的外表图画、内部构造及放置的物品描述得具体全面。内容丰富,层次分明,结构完整。
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