1. Through the detailed description of the stationery box, the article reflects the love of the author. According to the order from the outside to the inside and from the top to the bottom, the paper describes the exterior picture, the interior structure and the items placed in the pencil box in a concrete and comprehensive way. The content is rich, the level is clear and the structure is complete.
2.语言运用精妙,用丰富的词语来表现文具盒内物品的摆放状态,如“睡着”、“横”、“藏”......对小轮子的描写采用了“躲”字,既生动又准确。
2. The use of language is exquisite, and rich words are used to show the placement of items in the stationery box, such as "sleeping", "horizontal", "hidden"... The description of the small wheel adopts the word "hidden", which is vivid and accurate.
3.文章的描写生动形象,比喻贴切。语言自然流畅,叙述有条不紊,整体感强。
3. The description of the article is vivid and figurative. The language is natural and fluent, the narration is orderly, and the whole feeling is strong.
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