In fact, I didn't know that my mother was knitting sweaters for me. As soon as I heard that I wanted to buy clothes, I quickly knitted them. When I woke up in the middle of the night, I saw my mother knitting sweaters for me under the light, and tears came to my eyes unconsciously. After more than ten days, the sweater is ready. My mother takes it to me. I looked at the beautiful sweater and then at my mother. I found that my mother lost a lot of weight in order to catch up with her sweater, and tears fell down
我为有这样的妈妈感到自豪,我在心里深情地呼唤:“妈妈啊!您是我的好妈妈!”
I am proud of having such a mother, and I call in my heart affectionately: "Mom! You are my good mother! "
点评:
Comment:
1.文章采用倒叙的手法,将读者带入往事的回忆,成功塑造了一位孝敬老人、疼爱子女的母亲形象,字里行间渗透着一种真挚的感情。
1. The article uses the flashback technique to bring the readers into the memories of the past, and successfully shapes the image of a mother who is filial to the elderly and loves her children. There is a sincere feeling between the lines.
2.文章中的对话体现出了人物个性特征,符合角色心理。
2. The dialogue in the article reflects the personality characteristics of the characters and conforms to the psychology of the characters.
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