&Long Nv's father asked suspiciously, suddenly and eagerly, he said, "change, change, I will change for her even if I want to eat! & quot; (from & quot; suspicions & quot; to & quot; eagerness & quot; to write the change of expression, two & quot; must & quot; can be seen with resolute attitude.". )
"可医疗费是很昂贵的,大约需要20万元左右。再说这合体的肾又从哪里去找呢?"医生同情而又为难地说。(人物语言符合人物身份,很有个性。这几段对话形式变化多样。)
&But the medical expenses are very expensive, about 200000 yuan. And where can we find the kidney of this combination. (the character language is in line with the character's identity and has personality. The forms of these dialogues vary. )
龙女的父亲急呆了,他没说话,只是沉默,只是流泪。(情态描写得体。两个"只是"写出了急切,写出了无奈。此处无声胜有声。)
Long Nv's father was in a hurry. He didn't speak, but was silent, just crying. (the description of modality is appropriate. Two & quot; s just & quot; s are eager and helpless. Silence is better than sound.)
这件事很快传开了,人们都主动地捐款,来救助龙女。(过渡自然,情节陡转。一方有难,八方支援。)
The story spread quickly, and people offered to donate money to help Longnv. (the transition is natural and the plot changes abruptly. If one side is in trouble, support from all sides.)
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