全市各级领导一边组织了"献爱心"的捐款活动,一边在媒体上寻找合适的献肾者。这时,山东一位干部来电说,要献出一个肾。人们忧愁的脸上绽开了一丝笑容。(龙女患病,众人相助,侧面描写社会各界捐助活动,这真是文明之花处处开,生活亮点时时有。)
At the same time, leaders at all levels of the city organized a donation activity of & quot; giving love & quot; and at the same time, they searched for the right kidney donors in the media. At this time, a cadre in Shandong called and said that he would donate a kidney. There was a smile on people's sad faces. (the dragon lady is ill and everyone helps her. She describes the donation activities from all walks of life. It's really a flower of civilization that blooms everywhere and highlights life from time to time.)
换肾手术成功后,在医务人员悉心护理下,龙女康复很快。(略写换肾手术,目的在于突出"关爱"主题,剪裁得体,详略得当)。龙女知道这一切时,觉得这仿佛是一场梦,一场让她无法置信的梦。可无论如何,在龙女的眼里,她已有了成于上万的父母--那些曾经救助过她的好心人,是他们给了她新的生命。(写龙女所感,有助于主题的升华。)
After the success of the kidney replacement operation, under the careful care of the medical staff, Longnv recovered quickly. (the purpose of sketching out kidney replacement surgery is to highlight the theme of & quot; Care & quot;. It's cut appropriately and detailed appropriately.). When Longnv knew all this, she thought it was like a dream, a dream she couldn't believe. In any case, in Longnu's eyes, she has become tens of thousands of parents - those who have helped her, they gave her a new life. (writing about the feelings of the dragon lady helps to sublimate the theme.)
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