After graduating from high school, her son handed over an express mail with the seal of "Admission Office of Tsinghua University" to her, crying and saying: "Mom, I always know that I am not a smart child, it is you..." At this time, the mother was sad and happy, and could not help but hold back the tears in her heart for more than ten years, letting it hit the envelope in her hand.
显而易见,文中的母亲是一位伟大的母亲,是一位称职的母亲,如果没有她一次次对儿子的表扬,没有一次次对儿子的理解与信任,没有一次次送给儿子信念,那么结果只能是儿子承受无言而苦痛的失败。
Obviously, the mother in this article is a great mother and a competent mother. If she does not praise her son, understand and trust his son, and give him faith, the result can only be his son's failure to bear wordless and bitter pain.
可见,信念是人生的肩膀。这肩膀能够擎起人生的大树,在枝繁叶茂间,我们发现了肩膀创造的奇迹。
It can be seen that faith is the shoulder of life. This shoulder can hold up the tree of life. In the luxuriant foliage, we found the miracle created by shoulder.
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这是一篇感悟类的文章,作为一篇满分作文。它有以下几点值得称道:
This is a sentiment article, as a full score composition. It has the following points to be praised:
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