Different articles always bring us different results. When you first read this excellent work, you may feel a little insipid or even worried. Yes, there is no neat sentence pattern or profound philosophy at the beginning, no ingenious response or sublimation of thought at the end. Read again, you will be feeling surging, feeling from the heart. It turns out that after a lot of gossip, the sun is shining all over the sky. Seemingly simple articles, like a cup of coffee, are fragrant and touching.
写作大致有三种境界:第一种境界是不懂技巧,第二种境界是善用技巧,第三种境界是不用技巧。是啊,真正的高手能将技巧用得了无痕迹,本文显然达到了第三种境界。语言看似信手拈来,实则匠心独具。一句“距离是那盏神灯,或是那句‘芝麻开门’”,观点鲜明,情趣顿生。解读《蒹葭》,画面灵动,凝练生辉;引用席慕容话语,花香四溢,理性充沛;最后在苏轼超然出世的人生境界中收束,用一句“看陌上花开”树起了思想的丰碑。篇章结构,不事雕琢,却是浑然天成。(罗小军)
There are three levels of writing: the first level is not to understand skills, the second level is to use skills, and the third level is not to use skills. Yes, a real master can use his skills without trace. This article obviously reaches the third level. Language seems to come at your fingertips, but in fact, it is unique. A sentence "distance is the magic lamp, or the sentence" open sesame door ", the point of view is clear, the interest is born immediately. Reading Jianjia, the picture is vivid, concise and vivid; quoting the words of Xi Murong, the flowers are fragrant and rational; at last, in Sushi's transcendental realm of life, the poem "seeing flowers blooming on the road" is used to build a monument of thought. The structure of the text is not carved, but naturally formed. (Luo Xiaojun)
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