What's not enough: first, the beginning is not concise and clear enough. The "Introduction" at the beginning of the article -- ask questions concisely and quickly. For example, "why does curiosity kill people? Let me give you an example. " The answer of the latter sentence should be deleted. It's OK to just ask questions. First, the structure is incomplete. The last "conclusion" part must correspond to the beginning of the article. Therefore, the ending can be added with "from her eyes, I also see my firm eyes, grasp curiosity, and dedicate myself!" "this" harmful "curiosity!" so that the structure of the article is integrated. (Zhu Qinghe)
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