在自然中生活_高中英语作文_高中英语-查字典英语网

在自然中生活

把自然收藏于胸，这个都市里便处处弥漫了自然的呼吸。

The collection of nature in the chest, the city will be filled with natural breath.

【名师点评】

[comments on famous teachers]

这个作文题目生活化味很浓，要求考生从自己的生活感悟出发来写作。本文就是这方面的典型。

This composition topic has a strong sense of life, which requires the examinees to write from their own life perception. This paper is a typical example of this.

本文取材于考生自己的生活体验，立足于自我感怀，所选材料都来自考生自己的生活体验和感悟，且情景渲染细腻真切。作者多种修辞手法的运用使景物描写活灵活现，将作者的感情、体验融入其中。“多情的流水正从你脚边绕过，不远处，一朵红莲开得正盛，微风拂过，它一低头的温柔深深打动了你的心”，读着这样的文字，也随着作者一起体验到了在大自然生活的绿意。

This paper is based on the examinee's own life experience and self feelings. All the selected materials are from the examinee's own life experience and perception, and the scene rendering is delicate and true. The use of various rhetorical devices of the author makes the description of scenery vivid, and integrates the author's feelings and experience into it. "The passionate water is bypassing from your feet, not far away, a red lotus is blooming, the breeze is blowing, its gentle bow deeply touched your heart". Reading such words, we also experience the green meaning of living in nature together with the author.