文章写了两个生活场景:一是清晨,走在路上,将眼中所见之自然美景,与现实生活中的都市生活进行对比,诠释了“在自然中生活只需一刹那的感动”的内涵;一是周末,下雨靠在窗边看雨中景色,感悟到了“在自然中生活,只需一颗诗意的心”的话题内涵。两幅精美的画面,情与景融合在一起。这两个极富诗情画意的场景,有力地揭示了文章的观念——只要有了一颗善感而自然的心,这个城市便会披上一层茸茸的绿意,从而扣住题目,使文章中心鲜明。(罗胤)
The article writes two life scenes: one is to walk on the road in the morning, compare the natural beauty seen in the eyes with the urban life in real life, and interpret the connotation of "living in nature only needs a moment's touch"; the other is to watch the rain scenery by the window at the weekend, and realize the topic connotation of "living in nature only needs a poetic heart". Two beautiful pictures, feeling and scenery are integrated together. These two poetic and picturesque scenes effectively reveal the concept of the article - as long as there is a kind and natural heart, the city will be covered with a layer of fuzzy green, so as to catch the title and make the article center distinct. (Luo Yin)
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