Raising your hand is a small thing, committing is a small thing, and the details are even more a small thing. Eating is a small matter, speaking is a small matter, going out on the street is a small matter, going home is a small matter, communicating with a friend is a small matter, communicating with a stranger is a small matter, in fact, life is such a small matter, we need to do it bit by bit; even if it is such a small matter of national rejuvenation, we need to do it every 1.3 billion.
我愈发地明白爷爷的良苦用心,也愈发地感谢他,他用严厉的教育告诉我,要做一个秉承中华传统的人,做一个含金量高的人。
I understand my grandfather's hard work more and more, and I thank him more and more. He told me with strict education that we should be a person who adheres to the Chinese tradition and has high gold content.
我又何尝不希望像我爷爷一样的人多些,再多些,训导出优秀的一代。让本就风雅高贵的中华之风,代代传下去!
I don't want to have more people like my grandfather, more people, and train the excellent generation. Let the elegant and noble Chinese style be passed down from generation to generation!
点评:由小见大是本文特点。难能可贵的是,作者把个人体验推而广之,想到了名人、伟人成功经验,并感悟到:细节成就伟大的人。由于把爷爷的言传身教和名人、伟人的典型生活细节结合在一起写,避免了抽象说理。语言有特色,流畅之中也有华采展现。
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