Who said that human beings should use the universal view of fraternity to see themselves and the earth. Cosmology tells us to learn to treat nature equally and regard human beings as ordinary members of the earth. When it comes to transforming ideas into actions, I think we should use the most micro perspective to see the world and our own behaviors. Because it is a small act of kindness that reflects the light of a soul and reflects a heart full of love and beauty.
点评:文章立意很成功。该文以识见为高,立意集中深刻,强调了要在举手投足之间善待自然,这切合了命题要求,敏锐切中社会热点,把举手投足这样的微观小事,和保护自然的宏观命题有效结合。当然,把动画片中的细节写进来,让文章有了具体可感的画面。
Comments: the article is intended to be very successful. This paper takes insight as a high priority and focuses on profound ideas. It emphasizes that we should treat nature well between action and action, which is in line with the requirements of the proposition. It is sensitive to the social hot spots, and effectively combines such micro small things as action and action with the macro proposition of nature protection. Of course, the details of the animation are written in, so that the article has a specific and sensible picture.
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