Chan's son, Fang Zuming, once wrote a song called "please let me fall", which expressed the troubled mood of tens of millions of children. It's inevitable to fall down on the road of life. What's terrible is that the eyes of family, school and society immediately flock to each other and weave into a dense net, so that children can't stand up in bewilderment, so they have to become captives of their eyes in helplessness. ?

可是快看，那艘为目光所缚的小船，正拼命地向远方鼓足云帆。就请家庭松开过度关爱的目光，请学校放下过分指责的目光，请社会转移过于关注的目光，将它们换为理解与宽容，放那一叶云帆去济沧海吧！

But look, the boat, which is bound by the eyes, is desperately drumming cloud sails to the distance. Let's ask the family to let go of the excessive care, the school to let go of the excessive criticism, and the society to turn the excessive attention into understanding and tolerance. Let's go to jicanghai!

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Famous teachers' comments

考场作文要学会“化题为象”。所谓“化题为象”，是指善于借助“象形想象”，化抽象为具象，用具体生动的形象来表情达意，力避概念化图解话题。这篇作文的作者深谙此道，他把成长中的孩子比作“一艘扬帆起航的小船”，全文的阐述紧紧扣住“一叶云帆”这个意象，强调小船“自会在风雨的磨炼中变得坚强”，这就大大增强了文章的可读性，使其更能吸引人、说服人。

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