A river, a sad song, to be a real self, full of river and ocean, that is Wen Tianxiang's unique singing!
一页历史一面镜子,做真正的自我,昭示理性与忠贞,那是屈平的水中离骚!
A page of history, a mirror, to be a real self, to show rationality and loyalty, that is Qu Ping's water Lisao!
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这篇考场作文的精彩之处主要有三:一是构思精巧,借助陶渊明等三位历史名人的行为来诠释文章主旨;二是语言精美,开篇及结尾部分精彩的排比,使全文神采飞扬;三是结构清晰,先总说,主体部分以小标题的形式分述,收篇处呼应开头,思路清晰而严谨。
There are three main highlights of this composition in the examination room: first, it is elaborately conceived, with the help of the behavior of three historical celebrities such as Tao Yuanming to interpret the main idea of the article; second, the language is exquisite, and the wonderful arrangement of the opening part and the ending part makes the full text lively; third, the structure is clear, first of all, the main part is described in the form of a small title, and the closing part echoes the beginning, with clear and rigorous thinking.
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