如果说,刚才一幕只是对我的一次震撼,那么,接下来的一幕则是对我心灵的一次洗涤。国歌乐响起,校园内依然是一片沉寂,可校园外却响起了农民工们嘹亮的国歌声。伴随着这一声声纯洁的国歌声,我心灵的污垢在一层层褪去。我犹如清夜闻钟,又如受了当头一棒。我和同学们挺直了自己的身体,唱出了国歌声……
If one scene is just a shock to me, then the next scene is a washing of my soul. The national anthem music sounded, the campus is still a quiet, but outside the campus sounded the loud National Anthem of migrant workers. Along with this pure national anthem, the dirt of my soul is fading layer by layer. I'm like hearing a clock at night, and I'm like being hit on the head. My classmates and I straightened our bodies and sang the national song
人人头顶有一方天。农民工并没有因为社会上的某些歧视而丧失自己的天空。他们,凭着满腔的爱国热情,撑起了属于他们的那片天空,明净,辽阔,深远!
There is a day on everyone's head. Migrant workers have not lost their sky because of some social discrimination. They, with full of patriotic enthusiasm, hold up the sky that belongs to them, clear, vast and far-reaching!
评点:此文取材于学生日常生活,并放眼“人世间”,这是高中作文教学的根本导向。生活的溪流,一旦撞上礁石,就会激起令人心动的浪花,中学生应当善于捕捉这种“浪花”。此文作者,能把“自己”摆进去,可嘉!
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