The full text is based on the fictitious "you" - literature, which expresses the deep feeling of the heart with the words full of feelings. It is necessary to hold the hand of literature until forever. In this paper, we use "it's you", "it's you" and "it's still you" to expound "the reason why we should hold the hand of literature tightly": literature makes us travel through time and space; makes our life colorful; makes us feel the philosophy of life. During this period, there are not only the free display, but also the reflection of literary connotation. The writing is fluent, and the whole sentence like parallelism is often used, which is full of emotion and has a momentum of one breath. It is worth mentioning that the first and last language, with the appeal of "shaking hands with literature", shows the comprehensive ability of candidates to use words. The obvious disadvantage is that there are too many citations, the suspicion of falling out of the bag, it seems simple and insufficient, and there are more algae. In fact, to write one's feelings for literature does not lie in how much one knows, but in the inseparable affinity between oneself and literature, which makes literature an important part of one's life.
[考场小绝招] 应当说“我想握住你的手”这样一个温情的题目,是有利于爱好文学的同学的。要写好这篇作文,一是要充分调动自己的文学积累,二是要学会造境抒情,本身使用第二人称,化虚为实,就有利于抒情,加之使用排比等整句,一路铺排而来,层层推进,这样就使感情越发浓郁,使行文更富有感染力。
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