I went to an old man and said, "excuse me, do you like reading online?" "I don't like it, but I'm not against it. People like us can't keep up with their eyes on the Internet, so it's better to read a book and take it slow! "

一系列的调查结果表明：对于网上阅读好还是不好，人们都各值(执)一词。但我认为，网络毕竟是一种科技的产物，它能帮助我们更快更便捷地获取知识。

A series of survey results show that: for online reading is good or bad, people all value (hold) the word. But I think, after all, the Internet is a product of technology, which can help us acquire knowledge faster and more easily.

新世纪的发展，新科技的腾飞，带给我们的是超越，是希望，同时更是与时俱进的创新。

The development of the new century and the rapid development of new technology bring us transcendence, hope and innovation with the times.

让我们舞动科技与知识的羽翼齐飞吧！

Let's fly with the wings of technology and knowledge!

[误区警示] 本文紧扣材料，由材料的含意来确定立意，“舞动科技与知识的羽翼齐飞”这个立意较深刻，结构较严谨，语言富有鼓动性。因此，在初评时，我们给了45分。但仔细分析，文章存在很多问题，主要表现在两个方面：一是论证的中心不集中。如在阐述知识与科技这个问题时，大量的调查，笔者认为没有必要，完全可以以例子的形式来呈现，这样才能使得文章的结构更紧凑，论证更集中。二是语言基本功不扎实，病句、错别字影响了阅卷老师对文章的整体评判。怎样把这篇二类文章升格呢？笔者认为：

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