天龙公司总经理夜访吴市长,并送来一纸包。――纸包里装的是什么?平地起了波澜,悬念越来越悬。
The general manager of Tianlong company paid a night visit to Mayor Wu and sent a bag. What's in the paper bag? The level ground has been billowing, and the suspense is more and more hanging.
天龙中标――意料之中。但神秘的纸包仍然让人牵肠挂肚。
Tianlong wins the bid -- expected. But the mysterious paper bag is still worrying.
吴市长揭开谜底――纸包里装的是一叠以前长江大桥发生事故的惨不忍睹的照片!
Mayor Wu solved the mystery - the paper bag contained a bunch of ugly photos of the accident of the Yangtze River Bridge!
意料之外!情节达到高潮。
contrary to expectation! The plot climaxes.
短短的篇幅,但故事情节一波三折,而且悬念丛生,让人欲罢不能,实属不易。
It's a short space, but the story is full of twists and turns and suspense. It's hard to stop.
文章的细节描写也很精彩。如“那个总经理这时从皮包里掏出一个纸包……一夜不曾熄……”一段文字,语言精练,表现力强,显示了作者周密的构思和语言的严谨。 以上文章由河南高考语文阅卷评价组成员、郑州一中语文教研组组长魏新磊推荐并点评。
The details of the article are also wonderful. For example, "the general manager then took out a paper bag from the leather bag It doesn't last a night... " A paragraph of writing, concise language, strong expression, shows the author's careful conception and language rigor. The above article is recommended and commented by Wei Xinlei, a member of Henan college entrance examination Chinese marking evaluation group and leader of Zhengzhou No.1 Middle School Chinese teaching and research group.
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