The other is Dr. Sun Yat Sen, the pioneer of the Chinese revolution. He enjoys high prestige among the masses of the people. After he became the president of Nanjing interim government, his power reached the peak of his political career. People from all walks of life unanimously recommended sun Mei, Sun Yat-sen's elder brother, as the governor of Guangdong Province. At that time, Sun Yat-sen would surely guarantee his elder brother's prosperity with only a little approval. However, the great man didn't do so. He just declined politely and said, "my elder brother has limited ability and can't bear the heavy task." How can we not be so admirable.
勿以亲疏定是非就意味着抛弃小我,一己之私利,来成全大我,寻求真理;勿以亲疏定是非就意味着克制感悟,注重理性,让理性之光熠熠生辉!勿以亲疏定是非其实就意味着一种广博的爱!
Don't set right and wrong by intimacy means abandoning the ego and self-interest to complete the ego and seek truth; don't set right and wrong by intimacy means restraining perception, paying attention to reason and making the light of reason shine! Don't set right and wrong by intimacy, which means a kind of broad love!
评点:这是一篇颇见“功力”的文章。作者先由《出师表》引出自己的观点:“勿以亲疏定是非”,然后从正反两个方面进行论证,最后归结文章,遵循的是一般议论文的套路,并没有别出心裁出奇制胜之处。但作者在论述自己的观点时,从古今文史资料中引用材料,颇有顺手拈来左右逢源之感,显示出作者比较扎实的文史功底,这靠的是平日的积累和功夫,不是“灵机一动”所能达到的。这是读书作文的正路,也是值得充分肯定的。但作者在引用“诗文”时,有些文句,文气还不够贯通,可在行文技巧上下些功夫。
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