Comment: This is an article with a lot of "skill". The author first draws out his own point of view from the teacher's list: "don't judge right and wrong by intimacy", and then demonstrates it from both positive and negative aspects. Finally, the author sums up the article and follows the pattern of general argumentative papers. There is no originality. However, when discussing his own views, the author quoted materials from the ancient and modern literature and history materials, which showed that the author had a good command of literature and history, which depended on his daily accumulation and Kung Fu, but not on the ability of "brainstorming". This is the right way to read and write, and it is also worthy of full affirmation. However, when quoting "poetry and prose", the author has some sentences and styles that are not enough, so he can make some efforts in writing skills.
(湖南师大文学院教授陈果安点评)
(comments by Chen Guoan, Professor of Arts College, Hunan Normal University)
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