2003年高考上海卷优秀作文--杂而不乱归于大同_高中英语作文

2003年高考上海卷优秀作文--杂而不乱归于大同

At the intersection of time and space, all the "miscellaneous" are integrated, regardless of boundaries, into this magical universe.

倒是真符合这样的一个标准。“各美其美，美人之美，美美与共，天下大同。”我们提倡“杂”，因为若是没有“杂”，也就不会有“大同”。由杂到同，这是我的一点感悟。

It really meets such a standard. "The beauty of each, the beauty of the beauty, the beauty and the common, the world is the same." We advocate "miscellaneous", because if there is no "miscellaneous", there will be no "Datong". From miscellaneous to the same, this is my feeling.

（本文得分为69分）

(the score of this paper is 69 points)

简评：本文的优点，主要是站得较高，看得也远。为了论述大千世界的丰富复杂性以及“美美与共，天下大同”这一理想的正确，作者从中国历史谈到宇宙时空，从传统文化讲到时代精神，行文颇有一点大开大合的气势，立意却又是首尾一贯的，因而也就有了形散神聚的好处。

Brief comment: the advantage of this article is mainly to stand high and see far. In order to discuss the richness and complexity of the great world and the correctness of the ideal of "beauty and common, the world is in harmony", the author talks about the space-time of the universe from Chinese history, from traditional culture to the spirit of the times, and his writing is a little open and harmonious, but his intention is consistent from the beginning to the end, so it also has the benefits of form, mind and concentration.