"The sinister Chen Shuibian has embarked on the road of splitting the country from here, and the evil smile on his lips has dried up his ugly soul."
我不想再读下去,抚摸眼前的这扇门,沧桑而厚重。历史本没错!错的是他们洞开了本不应该洞开的大门,跨出了他们本不应该跨出的一步!
I don't want to read on and touch the door in front of me. It's vicissitudes and heaviness. History is right! What's wrong is that they have opened the gate that they should not have opened and stepped out of the step that they should not have taken!
枫竹林飘荡着幸福的歌谣,我回眸最初的那扇门,它闪着幽蓝幽蓝的光,我毫不犹豫地走了进去,迎接我期待的黄金般的人生!
Maple bamboo forest is floating with happy ballads. I look back at the original door, which is shining with blue light. I walk in without hesitation to meet the golden life I am looking forward to!
名师点评
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这是一篇构思巧妙,既有独特思想,又有深刻见解的考场佳作。
This is a masterwork with ingenious conception, unique thoughts and profound insights.
作者驰骋想象的翅膀,开篇,用抒情的笔触为我们设置描绘了一方迷离神奇的梦幻景致,昭示全文的表现手法和写作风格,为后文做铺垫。并用假想手法设定一条神秘的古道,用以开启后文。正是有了这条神秘的古道,抒情主人公“我”才能“去找寻幸福的人生”,于是,才有了后文的情景、故事、认知以及感慨。
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