It's hard to know that you should think of the danger in safety and never be afraid of the danger. You should never repeat our mistakes one step at a time. There are many outstanding talents in Shu camp. If we work together, we will be able to unify the whole country and revive the Han Dynasty. In this way, I will die with smile.
罪人:马谡
Sinner: Ma Su
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这篇文章的亮点有二:一、构思别致,以遗书形式巧解文题。作者勾沉历史,以三国名将马谡的身份痛说经历,反省自身,深刻检讨自己不听忠言,刚愎自用,铸成千古大错的罪行,告诫蜀之谋臣武将要以己为鉴,切勿因饱读军书,熟谙战法而纸上谈兵,草莽行事;勿倚卒多士强而狂妄自重,轻敌不备。要深刻铭记“满招损,谦受益”的格言,时时勉之。文章言辞凿凿,情意殷殷,文笔流畅,诚可感人。二、作者深谙历史知识,深悟《三国》神韵,熟悉文言技法,使之在考场上还是获得了相对高分。
There are two highlights of this article: first, the idea is unique, and the essay is skillfully solved in the form of bequeath. The author ponders the history, talks about his experiences as a famous general of the Three Kingdoms Ma Su, introspects himself, deeply reviews his crimes of disobedience, headstrong and making a great mistake for thousands of years, and admonishes the strategists and generals of Shu to take themselves as a mirror, not to talk about military affairs on paper and act recklessly because they are full of reading military books, familiar with the tactics of war, and not to rely on the strength of many soldiers to be arrogant, self respecting and unprepared for the enemy. We should keep in mind the maxim of "full loss, modest benefit" and encourage it from time to time. The words of the article are chiseled, the feelings are deep, the writing is fluent, and it is sincere and touching. 2、 The author is familiar with historical knowledge, the verve of the Three Kingdoms, and the classical Chinese techniques, so that he still gets relatively high marks in the examination room.
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