同时这也是一篇不注意考场写作技巧和细节,痛失街亭,未能获得满分的考场作文。其严重失误有二:一、分析欠深入,说理显肤浅;二、字数严重不足,连标点在内只有700来字。
At the same time, it's also a composition that doesn't pay attention to the writing skills and details of the examination room, loses the kiosk and fails to get full marks. There are two serious mistakes: first, the analysis is not in-depth and the reasoning is superficial; second, the number of words is seriously insufficient, including punctuation, only 700 words.
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